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 Post subject: My Dad and I
PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 6:44 pm 
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My Dad
my dad and I play a soccer and i play a Inline skate
my dad come and see it
I play Game my dad
help and I do with my mom I win the game
and we play baseball and handball.

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 Post subject: Include a Topic Sentence
PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 6:50 pm 
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Dario, be sure to write a topic sentence. It should come first and tell the main idea. Check out this revision...

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My dad and I are very active. We often play soccer together, and I enjoy inline skating with him as well. He always comes to the playground to watch me inline skate. At home I play games with my dad like chess and yutnori. My dad helps me beat my mom. In addition, we like to play baseball and handball together. My dad and I do a lot of cool things together.
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